Tēnā korua James and Kade Well done for using your writing skills and diagram skills to share your learning about marae and wharenui. I can see from your work you have learnt a lot about the structure of a wharenui and some reasons why marae are important to a community. Your work was also well presented.
Next time you need to work on reading your work carefully to check it makes sense (there was quite a bit you had to fix with me) and to check your spelling carefully. As we discussed, next time don't use music in your videos as it makes it hard to hear you and also we have to make sure the music is free to use.
Tēnā korua James and Kade
ReplyDeleteWell done for using your writing skills and diagram skills to share your learning about marae and wharenui. I can see from your work you have learnt a lot about the structure of a wharenui and some reasons why marae are important to a community. Your work was also well presented.
Next time you need to work on reading your work carefully to check it makes sense (there was quite a bit you had to fix with me) and to check your spelling carefully. As we discussed, next time don't use music in your videos as it makes it hard to hear you and also we have to make sure the music is free to use.
Good teamwork boys.
Thank you next time we will work on Reading it to see if it makes sense
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