Monday 8 April 2019

If I Had Wings.

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about If I Had Wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own If I Had Wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem. 


1 comment:

  1. Hi Kade. Well done for completing your poem and using some of the senses. I liked the line where you talked about flying over a Hurricanes vs .
    Crusaders game and hearing a try. Your next step is to try to use some more adjectives.

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