We will be successful if we….
- Use language features to make our writing better and more interesting.
-Use our senses to help the reader imagine this place.
-Have some Te Reo Māori words.
-use descriptive language that has impact for our reader.
Writing always needs...
-correct spelling and punctuation.
-sentences that make sense.
-different sentence starters.
-paragraphs
Hi Kade
ReplyDeleteIt was great to see that you were engaged in this piece of writing and the idea of doing a scary story like IT. The main thing I needed to help you with was your punctuation and helping you to make sure that your short story made sense for the reader. These are things for you to keep working on.
It was good to see you using some descriptive language like, "There was moss all over the house. It looked so creepy."